More Revision
Since I no longer have any page restrictions, I'm now able to devote more pages to the development of my Geth Basestormer. This is the first.
Skullery: An experiment in art looking back at its audience
Driven by pnuematics and McKibbens air muscles, and using a Microsoft Kinect as its 'eyes,' Skullery was a large technical challenge. The hope was to create a piece of art that would track its audience across the gallery. On the night of the exhibition, I was rewarded with viewers being surprised by, creeped out by, and ultimately delighted with Skullery's interaction with them.
for the page layout everything seems spread out and slightly chaotic to me, I know you separated both the silhouette and the ideation sketches but I still see no flow, like how Tim critiqued on our finals the layout should focus on small medium and large, a pattern. Maybe make the ideation sketches much larger then the silhouettes because they are too similar in size.
ReplyDeleteyeah i agree with jason. I don't understanding why you chose to layout the silhouettes into 3 different bundles. There isn't a difference in terms of style between the 3 groups so it seems almost pointless to do so.
ReplyDeleteI also think that you've put too many? Maybe put less and then stick a bigger drawing to one side... :)
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