More Revision

Since I no longer have any page restrictions, I'm now able to devote more pages to the development of my Geth Basestormer. This is the first.


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  1. Jason YoonNovember 26, 2012 at 6:48 PM

    for the page layout everything seems spread out and slightly chaotic to me, I know you separated both the silhouette and the ideation sketches but I still see no flow, like how Tim critiqued on our finals the layout should focus on small medium and large, a pattern. Maybe make the ideation sketches much larger then the silhouettes because they are too similar in size.

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  2. Michael LoNovember 26, 2012 at 7:09 PM

    yeah i agree with jason. I don't understanding why you chose to layout the silhouettes into 3 different bundles. There isn't a difference in terms of style between the 3 groups so it seems almost pointless to do so.

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  3. Christina YangNovember 26, 2012 at 7:33 PM

    I also think that you've put too many? Maybe put less and then stick a bigger drawing to one side... :)

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