More Revision
Since I no longer have any page restrictions, I'm now able to devote more pages to the development of my Geth Basestormer. This is the first.
Review and Revise
Today, I started working on revising the final pages from my Art Center project. They're currently arranged all around me on the floor, covered in little pink sticky notes. Below are the first versions of the prop and vehicle layouts that will be going into my portfolio. My main problem with my original layout pages is that everything was too small to read/see without the use of Photoshop's zoom tool. In the process of countering that problem, I ended up splitting the prop and vehicle page apart into two separate pages.
for the page layout everything seems spread out and slightly chaotic to me, I know you separated both the silhouette and the ideation sketches but I still see no flow, like how Tim critiqued on our finals the layout should focus on small medium and large, a pattern. Maybe make the ideation sketches much larger then the silhouettes because they are too similar in size.
ReplyDeleteyeah i agree with jason. I don't understanding why you chose to layout the silhouettes into 3 different bundles. There isn't a difference in terms of style between the 3 groups so it seems almost pointless to do so.
ReplyDeleteI also think that you've put too many? Maybe put less and then stick a bigger drawing to one side... :)
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